The dam is about to break
I am about to crumble
All the pent of feelings
Will be released
And allow me to stumble
Fight the good fight they say
Nothing to worry about
But how does one know that
My mind is screaming
Forever churning
Too much thinking
Stop! Enough already
Get out of your head
And into the zone
Of peaceful meditation
That uplifts your soul
As always, more to come.
That was so good, from the heart.
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Thank you Anna! My heart was breaking. Today it is better.
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Nothing lame about this at all – it was awesome
You should change the title of the blog post to Awesome attempt at poetry!!
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I always wonder what makes poetry poetry. This was getting thoughts out of my head. Hence lame attempt. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Poetry is very subjective, what one person may think is nonsensical crap another may think it is a masterpiece. Anytime you take thoughts from your head and put them on paper in a meaningful way it is poetry!!!
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Not lame at all! Very good at showing how a mind in turmoil feels. 🙂
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Thank you.
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Bravo! Nailed it!
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